We bore holes in us, as if attrition comes naturally.
Water does what water does, slowly builds more layers
while time comes on and throws us under inch-
thick crusts of residue. Slapped on fast, this way and
that, varnish up our weakest points so we can’t see
despite being flush against the panes – we stay
sitting, smoking slowly, refining the crudeness
of our gestures until we pump ourselves outside
–
even then, nothing can remind you of the day
when our selves glinted, shiny new:
hips crackle and spit, and something silver corrugates lips
with not quite words slagged out in heaps.
–
We grow inside houses, this much is clear, yet
our hair stays flat, we count the days in single strands.
Reduced to a specimen, a set of samples:
hours kept stock in breathing bowls, broken bones
pile up with kisses, the taste of iron.
My memories clamber under skies,
fuming full of smashed clay pots and the days
when our mouths moved, and music came
March 16th, 2012 at 10:51 am
A truly fine poem, the last image of the second stanza is particularly striking, especially ‘not quite words slagged out in heaps’. The second poem (Ores II) seems a bit spent or at least less charged in comparison.
Thanks for putting it out there, as ever.
b
March 17th, 2012 at 1:13 pm
I love all the ‘disjointed’ (to me?) images here, Benjamin. Beautiful writing… dreamlike quality that you’re so good at… are we made of clay because, then, the poem makes sense. Very, very clever – love it!